所需词汇及句型: Practical writing: NMET 2000 假设你是李华.在美国探亲.2000年2月8日清晨.你目击一起交通事故. 警察局让你写一份材料.报告当时所见情况.请根据下列图画写出报告. 注意:1 目击者应该准确报告事实, 2 词数100左右, 3 结尾已为你写好. After two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Possible version: It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. Suddenly the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. 学生习作 (A) At 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8th ,2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard. I thought the driver would stop to help but she didn’t. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain. Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that I went over to check out the old man. (B) It was 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8,2000. I was walking along the southern side of Park Road. I noticed that an old man coming out of City Park was going to cross the road. There was no car at the moment, so the old man started to cross the road. What happened next really surprised me. A yellow car roared down the 3rd Street, made a right turn and knocked the old man down. It happened in such a short time that the old man had no time to react. Seeing this, I rushed to the place where the old man was hit just in time to see the plate number of the yellow car. It was AC864. F. 地点描写 参考篇目:Unit 5 The British Isles Useful expressions: be located in / lie in / be situated in in the west of, to the west of off the east coast of cover an area of -- square kilometers be made up of / consist of be separated from be surrounded by has a population of ******** ********* ****** Location: north-west of Beijing Area: 3.5 square kilometers History: built in Qing Dynasty, 150 years of construction in 1860, Anglo-French Forces invaded Beijing, set fire, took away treasures, ruins, new China, protected, part of it, rebuilt in 1980’s, Yuanmingyuan Park Yuanmingyuan , which is a ruined park, is located in the north-west of Beijing. It covers an area of 3.5 square kilometers. It was built during the Qing Dynasty. After 150 years of construction, it became one of the most famous palaces in China as well as in the world. However, when Anglo-French forces invaded Beijing in 1860, the whole palace was set on fire. Treasures were taken away and stones lay in ruins. It was not until the founding of New China that it began to be protected. Part of it was rebuilt in 1980’s. The stones take on a golden color at the sunset, as if they were telling the story of yesterday. 文章的检查 时态.词形.人称.数.逻辑关系 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2000. 1. I was walking along Park Road towards to the east 2. when a old man came out of the park on the other 3. side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up 4. Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. 5. The next moment the car hit a man while he 6. was acrossing the road. He fell with a cry. The 7. car not stop but drove off at great speed heading 8. west. I notice the driver was a young woman, 9. the plate number was AC 864. About two minutes 10. later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. 【查看更多】
