Ⅲ. 短文改错(2011届高三年级第二次四校联考：临汾一中、

忻州一中、康杰中学、长治二中)

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　I am a senior 3 student. Recently I have made a survey among 100 boys and 100 girls. The result of the survey is as the follows: That the boys like to do most is to become businessmen while the girls favourite work is to be teachers. Only few boys want to do this job. It is interested that the number of boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. As for lawyers, more boys expect to have this job. Therefore, there are still students are not clear about their future. In a word, they all express they would work hard at their lessons for the College Entrance Examination. As long as they do this badly, they will realize their great dreams.

第二卷（共 35 分）
第四部分 写作（共两节．满分35分）
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。  
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our class hold a class meeting to discuss whether it is good or not for middle school students to surf the Internet. As the development of society, computers that are used widely nowadays. Surfing the Internet is only a good way we can get more informations but it is convenient to communicate with others. Therefore, not all the students agree to this opinion. They think it is harmful to spend much time play computer games. It is really the waste of time and money, that has a bad effect on us. In my opinion we should limit our time of surfing the Internet like a middle school student.

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无

错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（Ⅴ）；如果有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词，在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横向，在该行的右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

As summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are       1. _____

trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But     2._____

I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from      3._____

home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed     4._____

to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When 5.____

they came here, I will show them around my university       6. _____

and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them       7. ____

some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My   8._____

parents have done a lot for me, and I think it is high time 9._____

that I did anything special to express my thanks.          10._____

根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

Before going outside in the morning, many of us check a window thermometer(温度计)for the temperature. This helps us decide what to wear. _______71______ . We want our food to be a certain coldness in the refrigerator. We want it a certain hotness in the oven. If we don’t feel well, we use a thermometer to see if we have a fever. We keep our rooms a certain warmth in the winter and a certain coolness in the summer.

Not all the thermometers use the same system to measure temperature. We use a system called the Fahrenheit scale. But most other countries use the Centigrade scale.

Both systems use the freezing and boiling points of water as their guide._____72_______ .

The most common kind of thermometer is made with mercury(水银)inside a clear glass tube. As mercury (or any other liquid ) becomes hot, it expands. As it gets colder, it contracts(收缩). That is why on hot days the mercury line is high in the glass tube.______73______.

First. Take a clear glass juice bottle that has a cap; fill the bottle with coloured water. Tap a hole in the center of the cap using a hammer and thick nail. Put the cap on the jar. Then stick a plastic straw(吸管) through the nail hole.

_______74____________.

Finally. Place a white card on the outside of the bottle and behind the straw. Now you can see the water lever easily.

_______75___________.

As the temperature goes down, the water will contract, and the lever in the straw will come down. Perhaps you will want to keep a record of the water lever in the straw each morning for a week.

A. We use and depend on thermometers to measure the temperature of many other things in our daily lives.

B. Thermometers measure temperature, by using materials that change in the same way when they are heated or cooled.

C. Now that you know this rule you can make a thermometer of your own that will work.

D. The water will rise in the straw. As the temperature of the air goes up, the water will expand and rise even higher.

E. They label these in different ways. On the Fahrenheit scale water freezes at 32 degrees and boils at 212 degrees. On the Celsius scale water freezes at 0 degrees and boils at 100degrees.

F. Take wax (you may use an old candle if you have one) and melt some of it right where the straw is struck into the cap to seal(把..粘住) them together.

G. People use thermometers which are made by themselves when travelling around the world.

假如你是李华，于11月12日到达纽约，然后去找你的美国朋友Tom，但他不在家。请按以下内容给Tom留张便条。
火车晚点15分钟，与接你的Tom错过；
在火车上认识的定居美国的华人夫妇Taylor把你带到Tom家，Tom不在；
现在Taylor夫妇家；
务必今晚打电话给你64611128.
注意：1.词数100左右
2. 不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
I’m in New York!＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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Yours,
Li Hua