17.

10．you后加will. 时态错误

9．bring→take

8．the去掉。this, that, next, last和名词连用作时间状语时，往往不用介词

7．question→questions

6．happy→happily. happy是形容词，修饰动词要用副词happily

5．have→had. 时态不对

4．his→their, 指smith夫妇俩

3．√

2．for→of. It’s kind of sb to do sth是一个句型，意思是“某人好到足以做某事”