Question

【题目】初中生活即将结束，丰富多彩的学校活动一定给你留下了许多美好的回忆。根据图表提示，选择一次你最喜欢的活动进行描述。

内容包括：1．此次活动的过程；

2．你的收获或感受。

要求：1．词数：80-100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2．文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

Answer 1

【答案】My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. Of them, I’d like to share with you my favorite story about a basketball game. Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams. However, our captain hurt his finger during the third game. He is the brain of our team. When thinking of losing of the center, we were all down and couldn’t concentrate on the next match. Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up. With the help of our captain, we played as well as the first two games. Seeing our captain waving his injured finger, we made our biggest efforts in the following games. With the cheers of our students ,we won the champion. During the celebrations, we threw our captain into the air. I would never forget it because I understood the importance of teamwork for the first time.

【解析】首先：认真审题，明确要求。体裁：记叙文。人称：第一人称。时态：一般过去时为主，兼带一般现在时。写作要点：分享比赛，开头形势很好，队长受伤，鼓励我们继续比赛，最终取得胜利，欢欣鼓舞，将队长抛入上空，团队协作的重要性。其次：画出要点，以免遗漏。紧接着：围绕中心，添加细节。写出的词汇和短语。如： share with, a good start, hurt his finger/get his finger hurt, encourage sb. to do/cheer sb. up, make all efforts to do , throw…into the air, the importance of teamwork等等。然后注意表达，连贯得体，适当使用高级词汇和固定句型如：however, when thinking…,with the help of ….,seeing….等等。最后：仔细检查，工整书写。