Question

【题目】下面是汶川地震中的一张照片。它记录了一个叫郎铮的三岁男孩在地震十小时后被解放军从废墟(debris)中救出(rescue)。躺在担架(stretcher)上的他慢慢地举起右手向救他的人敬礼（salute to）。请你以“感动”为题，用英语简单描述这个故事并写出你的感想。
要求：故事描述要包括提供的所有信息。字数：80—100。短文开头已给出，不计入总字数。

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At 14:28 on May 12, an earthquake broke out in Wenchuan. Soon people all over China went to the rescue.

Answer 1

【答案】Moved

At 14:28 on May 12, an earthquake broke out in Wenchuan. Soon people all over China went to the rescue. A three—year—old boy named Lang Zheng was rescued from the debris by the PLA men ten hours after the earthquake. While he was lying on the stretcher, he slowly raised his right hand and saluted to the soldiers. His salute not only expressed his thanks to the people who saved him, but also moved the people around him. I was also deeply moved by his salute. As a three—year—old boy, he knew that the first thing to do was to express his thanks after he was saved. It is the good nature of the Chinese people.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们讲述一个汶川地震的时候，发生的一个感人的故事。汶川地震是在2008年的5月12号，我们在短文里记叙的是一件过去发生的事情，因此这篇短文应使用一般过去时态来叙述，注意谓语动词过去式形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。叙事作文要注意几个要素，即事情发生的时间、地点、人物和过程，在文章里要有清楚的交代，尤其是描写事情的过程要详细，有条理。这篇文章里还需要描写一下你对这件事情的感想，这个是需要学生们自己发挥想象力来充实的。写作时，要注意英语句式的表达习惯，使用正确的词汇和句型，使上下文的意思连贯，表达流畅。