Question

【题目】下面四幅图画描述了你某天放学后发生的一件事。请你根据这些图画提示，展开合理想象，用英语写一篇日记，时间是2012年5月11日，星期五，天气预报：有雨。

注意：

1．词数90左右。日记的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。

3．文中不得使用真实的人名、校名。

May 11, 2012 Friday rainy

This afternoon, when I walked out of school, the weather changed.

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Answer 1

【答案】

May 11, 2012 Friday rainy

This afternoon, when I walked out of school, the weather changed. There were thick dark clouds in the sky. I began to feel worried because I didn’t bring an umbrella or raincoat with me when I left home in the morning. It soon started to rain. When I was hurrying home, I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned round and saw it was Li Ping. He had an umbrella and asked me to share it with him. He walked all the way with me until I got home. How thankful I was for his kindness!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本题材料是四幅图画。动笔前应认真看图，了解图画内容，展开合理想象。然后根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。根据内容可知本文人称以第三人称较多，时态一般应该用一般过去时。

写作亮点：短文多次使用主从复合句，为文章增色不少，如：This afternoon, when I walked out of school, the weather changed. He walked all the way with me until I got home.等等。