Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是张亮，请根据下表，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你和你弟弟张翔的相同之处和不同之处，以便你们的美国朋友加深对你们的了解．

要求：70词左右，可适当发挥．

Answer 1

【答案】Zhang Xiang is my brother．He is younger than me，but he is as tall as me． His hair is long，but my hair is longer than his． He is much more outgoing than me，so he has many friends． He often goes out with them．However，I like to stay at home． He has cooler clothes than me． He is less hard-working，though．So he often gets worse grades than me．

【解析】

本题要求以我的口吻介绍我和我弟弟的的相同之处和不同之处，所以人称既有第一人称也有第三人称，时态用一般现在时。在动笔写作之前，要认真审题，明确文章要写的重点是我们的相同之处和不同之处。可以从外貌、性格、衣服、学习成绩等方面写彼此的异同。另外，可以使用一些比较句型，让文章更形象具体。可以选择合适的过渡词和关联词，使文章行文连贯、表达流畅。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。