Question

【题目】书面表达

Paul是你的好朋友，近几年来他的变化很大，请根据下面表格里提供的信息

写一篇短文，描述他五年前和现在的一些情况，简要介绍他的成长变化。

要求：1. 根据表格内容进行写作，可适当发挥；内容具体，语句通顺，书写工整。

2. 90词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文章中不能出现你自己的真实姓名、班级和学校。

Changes

in Paul’s Life

Paul is my good friend. He has changed a lot in the past five years.

Answer 1

【答案】

Paul is my good friend. He has changed a lot in the past five years. He used to be short, have short hair . He used to be a little heavy. But now he is thinner and much taller, and she has long straight hair. He used to be quiet and lazy. He liked surfing the Internet. But now he is active and humorous. He likes reading and playing basketball. He used to watch TV a lot and chat with others on the Internet. But now he also likes traveling, playing sports and listening to music. He used to eat junk food, but now he cooks himself at home. He likes vegetables and fruit.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的主题，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，叙事清晰，注意要点要齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全，今夕事件对比中时态运用恰当。文中有许多实用的表达方式，句式丰富，连词and与but等运用恰当；还使用一些有用的表达used to, chat with, listen to等。