Question

【题目】书面表达

请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

学会分享很重要。你有哪些东西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？请结合自身的一次经历，写一篇短文，并阐述分享的意义。

要求：1.词数不少于 80；

2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】It's very important to learn to share with each other.I have many things to share in different ways.For example，I can share some beautiful pictures，my favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQ，email which are widely used.Now I'd like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.

Emily was lonely and unhappy.Once I found her crying alone for some reasons.It made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her up.At first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after class.When we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with her.As time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with me.Now we are good friends.

In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up.We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.

【解析】本文属于话题作文，结合自身的一次经历，阐述分享的意义。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容词最高级+名词复数，make sb+形容词，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。