Question

【题目】写作

安(Ann)和安娜(Anna)是一对姐妹。请根据下图，用英语写一篇短文介绍她们姐妹俩。70词左右，可适当发挥。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Ann and Anna are sisters.

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Answer 1

【答案】Ann and Anna are sisters. Ann is as tall as Anna and they are both of medium build. Ann has longer hair than Anna. Ann is outgoing, but Anna is more outgoing than her and Anna is very popular in their school. They both have a lot of beautiful clothes, but Anna’s clothes are much cooler. They are in the same class and are both good at schoolwork. However, Ann’s grades are a little better than Anna’s

【解析】

本文属于图表作文，介绍安和安娜。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如as 形容词原级 as，both，of medium build，than，much+比较级，be good at, however, a little等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。