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【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号^，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I went to a shop to buy a jacket one Sunday. It is famous one where there are a variety of clothes. I looked all around and finally find an attractive jacket. When I was asked the price, the assistant said, "Seventy dollars." He added that if I paid by cash, he would give me a discount—ten percent off the fixing price. I thought it was so expensive and started to leave. As I was left, he grabbed me and said, "Okay. Forty-five dollars." Delighting, I bought the jacket. However, when I got home and tried on my new jacket, I realized that anything was wrong with it. It had a pocket where wouldn't open. I was speechless and looked at it in amazement.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】famous前加a

【2】find→ found

【3】去掉was

【4】by→ in

【5】fixing→ fixed

【6】so→ too

【7】left→ leaving

【8】Delighting→ Delighted

【9】anything→ something

【10】where→ which/that

【解析】

【1】famous前加a one指代上文提到的a shop，其前有形容词时，可和a连用。

【2】find→ found 时态不一致。叙述发生在过去的事情，find应改为一般过去时。

【3】去掉was 根据语境，应该是“我”询问价钱，主谓之间不存在被动关系。

【4】by→ in pay in cash用现金支付；pay by cheque用支票支付。

【5】fixing→ fixed “固定价格”要说the fixed price。形容词fixed意思是“固定的，不变的”。

【6】so→ too 衣服太贵买不起，应改为副词too修饰形容词expensive，表达失望的语气。

【7】left→ leaving 过去进行时（was leaving）表示过去将来的动作，即：我正要离开。

【8】Delighting→ Delighted delighted指人感到高兴的，在句中作状语，该句意为：我高兴地买回这件夹克。delighting则用来指令人高兴的事。

【9】anything→ something 肯定句要用something，表示出了一些问题。

【10】where→ which/that 先行词pocket（口袋）指物，应用关系代词which/that引导定语从句，且which/that在从句中作主语。