Question

14．最近，你们学校开展了以"中国梦"为主题的系列活动．你参加了其中的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇题为"My Chinese Dream"的演讲稿．内容要点如下：
1．你对中国梦的畅想；
2．你能为实现中国梦做出哪些努力．
注意：
1．总词数不少于100；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"My Chinese Dream"．
                                                                           
Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的梦想以及如何实现它．结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一、第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用．
重点短语和句型：
see doctors 看医生
cheer sb up 鼓励某人，让某人开心起来
with the help of sb 在某人的帮助下
come true 实现
When I was in Grade Seven，I was sick and often went to see doctors．
句中when连接时间状语从句．
In order to achieve my dream，I will study hard．
句中in order to表示目的，在句中作目的状语．
I think my dream will come true one day．
句中think后接宾语从句，省略了连词that．

解答 My Chinese Dream
    Good morning，everyone！
    The topic of my speech today is"My Chinese Dream"．【点明主题】
    Everyone has his dream．My dream is to be a doctor．When I was in Grade Seven，I was sick and often went to see doctors．（高分句型一） The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up．With the help of them，I was getting better．Now I'm very healthy．Since then I have hoped to become a doctor．In order to achieve my dream，I will study hard．（高分句型二） I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger．【讲述梦想】
    To be a doctor is really great．I think my dream will come true one day．（高分句型三）【表达观点】
    Thank you for listening！

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．