Question

假设你是张林，你班来自英国的交流学生John因病住院已两周，请你用英文给他写封信，主要内容包括：

询问病情，表示关切；

介绍班级近期活动，学习等情况；

表达祝愿。

   注意：1.词数100左右；

         2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

         3.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

                                                                   Yours,

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear John,

   How are you getting along these days? It’s two weeks since you went to hospital. And we’re informed that you are diagnosed with a severe disease and have to be in hospital for a period of time. We are concerned about your health and miss you much. The students are engaged in reviewing lessons. We’ve had an exam and the majority of us have made progress steadily. Surrounded by an academic atmosphere, we encourage each other and spare no effort. Don’t worry about your studies, we assure you that we’ll help you to make up for the lessons you missed.

   Cheer up! We are convinced and confident that you can overcome the disease and be with us soon. We are waiting for your backward!

   Best wishes!

                                                                    Yours 

                                                                    Zhang Lin

【解析】

试题分析：本题属于应用文中的书信。写信给同学表示关切，主要时态是一般现在时，人称较为复杂，要根据上下文使用合适的人称。要点：1.询问病情，表示关切；2.介绍班级近期活动，学习等情况；3.表达祝愿。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。

【亮点说明】本文中最大的亮点在于高级词汇的使用，如get along，be diagnosed with，be engaged in，overcome等都是考察的重点短语；

考点：考察应用文写作