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Mary is one of the girls whom I can help.Although she was good at maths, she was puzzled by English.She wanted to learn English well, yet she didn't know how she could learn it well.Then she asked me for help.I analyzed the reason why she was poor in English and then gave her some homework which was to copy the new words and to recite the text.Besides, I told her to speak English since other students could speak English.She made such rapid progress that she caught up with her class soon.I'm glad that she has achieved her goal.what a clever girl she is!

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Mary is one of the girls(whom)I can help.Although(she was)good at maths, she was puzzled by English.She wanted to learn English well, yet she didn't know(how she could learn it well).Then she asked me for help.I analyzed the reason why she was poor in English and then gave her some homework which was to copy the new words and(to)recite the text.Besides, I told her to speak English since other students could(speak English).She made such rapid progress that she caught up with her class soon.I'm glad(that)she has achieved her goal.What a clever girl(she is)!


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