Question

5．自行车是公认的绿色交通工具，也是我国最为普遍使用的交通工具．但随着汽车拥有量的不断增加，自行车出行受到很大冲击．请根据以下要点用英语写一篇讲演稿，呼吁大家骑自行车出行，享受低碳生活．
    内容要点：
    1．对环境的影响；2．对能源的消耗；3．对健康的影响．
    注意：
    1．词数120左右；2．开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
    3．低碳生活low carbon life
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
    With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motor vehicles．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motor vehicles．随着人们生活水平的提高，人们使用小汽车的趋势变成了一种流行．
高分句型二：
Thirdly，riding bikes does good to our health．第三，骑自行车对我们的身体有好处．
句型一 that people begin to turn to motor vehicles．该句是一个由that引导的同位语从句，that在从句中不作句子成分，同位的名词是tendency．同位语从句即用一个句子对某个抽象名词进行解释说明
句型二 riding bikes does good to our health 该句的主语是一个现在分词短语充当，此时应注意谓语应使用单数．其次该句谓语使用了一个固定的短语：do good to 对…有好处
此外，文章还使用了以下高级词汇和短语：with the improvement of  随着…的提高  keep fit 保持健康，in a word 总之

解答 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
   With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motor vehicles．（高分句型一）（提出观点）However，in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycle．
   Firstly，bicycle cause little pollution to the enviroment．Since a bicycle is much quieter than a motor vehicle，it doesn't cause noise pollution．Moreover，a bicycle never gives off harmful gas into the air．Secondly，either in the process of making bicycle or using them，it costs much less energy than a motor vehicle does．Thirdly，riding bikes does good to our health．（高分句型二）It is useful for training，building our body and keeping us fit．（分析不利影响）
   In a word，riding bikes will benefit both indivdual and the society．So why not enjoy a low carbon life by riding bikes more often？
   Thank you!

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