Question

Dear fellow students,

The 90^thanniversary of our school is on the way.

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Li Hua

 

Answer 1

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One possible version:

Dear fellow students,

The 90^th anniversary of our school is on the way. I propose students in our school should do something meaningful to celebrate.

Making every effort to work hard is encouraged. The atmosphere in class is vital to our school. We are to be the prde of our school in the future. Meanwhile, we’ll never forget our teacher. But for their efforts and devotion, we wouldn’t make it. Also, we’re expected to call on others to keep the surroundings clean on campus. We’re supposed to change the habit of littering wherever we go. After-class activities make our school life colorful. Our school clubs can also have a chance to make our school famous for its cultural environment.

To make our school better, we students ought to do our best to devote ourselves to the development of our school.

Li Hua

【解析】

试题解析：从文章体裁分析，本文是一篇记叙文的写作，主要让学生以“打造和谐校园”为主题展开叙述，内容应从包括以下四个方面来：一 ：学习意识。二：尊师重道。三：校园环境。四：课外活动。

【亮点说明】

文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如The atmosphere in class is vital to our school.（be vital to 对...是重要的）, But for their efforts and devotion, we wouldn’t make it(but for 要不是)，be supposed to do应该做某事，call on sb to do sth呼吁某人做某事，并且主语了句子的衔接如：meanwhile ，also 等。

考点：记叙文写作。