Question

6．假定你班在"珍爱生命，拒闯红灯"教育活动中，召开了一次主题班会．请你根据下表中的内容，用英语写一篇短文．

行人闯红灯的危害	1．妨碍交通，影响车辆的正常行驶．
	2．容易引发事故，危及他人和自身的生命安全．
	3．…（自己设想）
对行人闯红灯的处罚措施	1．批评教育，让其意识到闯红灯的危害性．
	2．当场给予警告并罚款．
	3．…（自己设想）

注意：
1．内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯；
2．词数：120左右．
参考词汇：pedestrian n．（行人）；jay-walk vi．（乱穿马路）； reprimand vt．（批评，训诫）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
This blocks traffic，seriously ①affects drivers and causes accidents to happen，endangering②the safety of pedestrians and drivers alike．
这阻碍了交通，严重影响了司机并导致了事故的发生，同时也危及了行人和司机的安全．
①副词seriously在句中作状语，修饰动词affects．
②此处为现在分词作状语，由于动词endanger与其逻辑主语This构成主谓关系，故用endangering．
句型二：
 When caught①jay-walking，pedestrians are reprimanded so that ②they will become aware of the dangers of doing this，or they are fined on the spot③．
当被抓到闯红灯时，行人会受到训斥或当场被罚款，以便让他们意识到这样做的危险．
①此处为过去分词作时间状语，由于动词catch与其逻辑主语pedestrians构成被动关系，故用过去分词caught．
②so that"以便，为了"引导目的状语从句．
③on the spot意为：立刻，当场．

解答 One possible version：
Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of pedestrians crossing the street while the traffic light is red．（首先介绍主题班会的内容）As we can see，some pedestrians don't obey traffic rules and jay-walk frequently．This blocks traffic，seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen，endangering the safety of pedestrians and drivers alike．【高分句型一】In a word，jay-walking produces negative effects and does not help to develop good social behavior．（说明行人闯红灯的危害）
   It is really a pity to see all this in our society and to deal with the situation，the government has taken some measures．When caught jay-walking，pedestrians are reprimanded so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing this，or they are fined on the spot．【高分句型二】Sometimes the traffic police will report jaywalkers to their workplace and expose them to the public．（对行人闯红灯的处罚措施）However，it will still take a long time to stop pedestrians from jay-walking．（指出制止行人闯红灯这一行为还需要一些时间）

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