Question

最近某高中开展以“校园杜绝零食”为主题的活动。假如你是该学校学生会主席，请以学生会的名义，参考下列内容提示，给全校学生写一封倡仪书。
内容提示：1. 指出吃零食的现象     2. 阐述吃零食的影响   3. 提出合理化的建议
注意： 1. 词数：100左右。
2. 对所给要点逐一陈述，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：零食 snacks    现象phenomenon

Answer 1

Dear fellow students,
There is a serious phenomenon in our school that many students will crowd in the school store to buy snacks after each class and some students even eat snacks in class.
Eating snacks is a bad habit and is also a waste of money. In addition, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too much fat and sugar. Eating snacks improperly may lead to fatness and illness. What’s worse, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, which pollutes our campus.
Dear fellow students, it’s high time that we shouldn’t act like kids any more. We high school students, should develop good eating habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balanced diet are essential for us.
Let’s form good eating habits and say no to snacks.

解析试题分析：考查本开放性作文写作。本文是一篇倡议书，主题是杜绝零食。所给出的文字提示并不多，考查可以先描述零食多达饿现象；如何从正反两个方面阐述吃零食的影响。最后提出自己的建议，容易把吃零食的钱买书等等。
考点：考查半开放性作文的写作
点评：本文难度较大，在写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。