Question

生活中常有意外事故发生。假设你和你班同学李华从锅炉房打完开水，在回寝室的路上，李华的热水瓶突然破裂，开水烫伤了李华的脚。你对此进行了必要的急救。请你结合此事，用英语写一篇100—120词的短文，向学校英文报Energetic Teens投稿，主要内容包括：

1. 事情发生的经过；

2. 你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步处理等)；

3. 简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识重要性的认识。

参考词汇：锅炉房boiler house  热水瓶thermos bottle

Accidents happen.                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                          

                                                                          

 

Answer 1

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Accidents happen. That day, Li Hua and I were on our way back after fetching some hot water when suddenly a sound of explosion scared me. Li Hua's thermos bottle burst and the spilt boiling water caused severe injuries to his feet. The burn was so severe that the skin was red and swollen. I could tell Li Hua was in extreme pain. I managed to stay calm, crazily searching for what I had learnt from my first-aid class. Immediately, I carried him to the water tap nearby and put his feet under the cold running water until the pain lessened. Afterwards, I called a taxi and rushed him to the hospital where he received further treatment. I was finally relieved. Only then was I aware what a difference a basic knowledge of first aid can make, especially in such a case.

【解析】本文叙述自己经历的一件事情，给出的要点很充分，所以跟翻译句子差不多。但千万不能只是翻译，需要用恰当的连词连接句子。叙述事情的经过时，不要太罗嗦，写出重要情节即可。最后一定表达急救知识的重要性。