Question

最近，学生会对1000名学生进行了关于“你是否愿意在网上购物？”的一项调查, 调查结果见下表。请根据图表所提供的信息写一篇短文，并发表自己的看法。

注意： 词数120左右

你是否愿意在网上购物？

结果	64%愿意	36%不愿意
原因	1.方便, 在家可买到所需物品 2.网上商品比较便宜, 而且可选择的品牌多	1. 害怕买到赝品 2. 担心被骗钱

   

Do you prefer shopping on line?

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Do you prefer shopping on line?

Recently, our Students Union has carried out a survey among 1000 students about whether they prefer shopping on line. The results are as follows.

64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need even when they are staying at home. Besides, they believe that goods on line are cheaper, and they have a variety of brands to choose from.

However, 36% of the interviewees don’t want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money.

Personally, I prefer shopping on line for the sake of its convenience. But only by guarding against the disadvantages will more and more people choose to shop on line.

【解析】

试题分析： 英语写作是一个人英语综合水平的体现。本篇写作题材是社会现象的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。