假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attract me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asked me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

假如你是李华，是一名高一学生，最近听同学说哈九中国际部在招生，你想申请去哈九中国际部学习。请你用英语给哈九中国际部写一封信咨询以下问题：

1．申请需要具备哪些条件；

2．是否需要入学考试及以后的课程安排；

3．费用问题(是否包括食宿和教材)。

注意：可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。词数100左右。

参考词汇：  国际部  International department       

Dear Sir/Madam,

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sincerely yours,

Li Hua

—Has the little girl passed ______ P.E. test?

—She has tried twice, and the teacher will allow her to have _____ third try.

A．the; 不填         B．a; the             C．the; a            D．the; the

 It’s sometimes difficult to tell one twin from _____.

A．another           B．some other        C．other             D．the other

 She rose from being a _______ to become a superstar.

A．somebody         B．nobody           C．something         D．nothing

______ likes money, but money is not ______.

A．Everyone, everything                    B．Everyone, anything

C．Someone, nothing                       D．Nobody, everything

Mr. Li doesn’t think that all bad language should be allowed. In his opinion, there are ______ that should be kept up.

A．degrees          B．levels             C．limits             D．standards

---How did your students express their thanks to you on Teachers’ Day?

---A gift together with many flowers _______ sent to me .

A．is                B．are              C．was              D．were

——Ms Lin looks rather a kind lady.

——But in fact she is cold and hard on us. You ____ believe it!

A．shouldn’t        B．wouldn’t         C．mustn’t          D．needn’t

Entering the room,I found Mary____ at the desk and____ a letter.

A．seated;wrote                          B．sitting;written

C．seating;writing                         D．seated;writing