这条路是那条路的两倍长。

误：This road is two times the length of that one．

正：This road is twice the length of that one．

正：This road is twice as long as that one．

这是我参观的最美的地方。

误：This is the most beautiful place that I have visited it．

正：This is the most beautiful place that I have visited．

他有可能一两天内来我们学校。

误：He is possible to come to our school in one or two days．

正：It is possible for him to come to our school in one or two days．

正：He is likely to come to our school in one or two days．

正：It is likely（possible）that he will come to our school in one or two days．

He asked her，“You have passed the exam，haven't you？”

误：He asked her that she had passed the exam．

正：He asked her if／whether she had passed the exam．

“Will you go abroad or stay in Beijing？”he asked me．

误：He asked me that I would go abroad or stay in Beijing．

正：He asked me whether I would go abroad or stay in Beijing．

“I will come here again today，”said he．

误：He said that he would come here that day．

正：He said that he would go there that day．

“I'll finish my work tomorrow，”she said．

误：She said that she would finish her work tomorrow

正：She said that she would finish her work the next day．

Tom says to me，“You can borrow my recorder．”

误：Tom says to me that you can borrow my recorder．

正：Tom tells me that I can borrow his recorder．

He has said“I'll study harder than ever．”

误：He has said that he would study harder than ever．

正：He has said that he will study harder than ever．

吃苹果的人比不吃苹果的人身体更健康。

误：Apple eaters prove healthier than those don't．

正：Apple eaters prove healthier than those who don't．