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I just came back from Britain last week．I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the UK from Feb．16 to 28．We paid a visit to a good many of places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District．I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite．I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings．The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there．The most excited thing for me in Britain was that I make a lot of friends there．

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Music is one of the arts．It is like the speaking language, but it uses sounds．Who invented music?

　　Who sing the first song? No one knows exactly the answers of these questions．But we know that music plays an important part almost everyone’s life．Baby and young children love to hear people singing to them．When they are a little old, they like to sing the songs they have heard．

　　When children go to the school, their world of music grows．In the middle grades students take music lessons．When they reach high school, we become interested in listening pop music．Music has meaning for everyone．It can make people happy but it can make them sad．

文中共有10处语言错误，

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I'm a middle school student name Li Ming．I'm writing to tell you something．Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber café near our school．I went there too in the other day．I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat．Some students were even talking about love affairs online．On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations．The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games．The Internet is good if we make good use of them．Otherwise, it will give us great harm．So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively．

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英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文．假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改．便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．

3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分．

Dear Jerry,

　　I'm glad to know that you had an interest in Chinese food．Here I'd like to tell you something about them．Chinese food is famous with its wide variety．The food in one area can be easy told from that in another．For example, Shanghai food, a little bit sweet, differ from Sichuan food that is rather hot．However, every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying, because each has a delicious taste and good for health．Since the restaurant in China usually serves special dish of different areas, you can enjoy various Chinese foods whenever you are．I'm looking forward to meet you here so that I can tell you more about Chinese food at table．

　　Best wishes．

Jin

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jin Jing,

Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you don't have self-confidence．The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make the friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate, and you can talk about your hobbies as well．When someone is in trouble, you should be ready to helping him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．

Yours,

Lily

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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线(－)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

Sports and games do much good to our health．They can make us strongly and keep us fit．Especially they can be of very value to people who work with their brains most of the day, for sports and games give people valuable practices in exercising the body．Sports and games also very useful in character-training．They usually demand not only of physical skill and strength but also courage, discipline and teamwork．For boys and girls, which is learned on the playground often has a deep effect on their characters．If each of them learned to work for his team and not for him on the football field, he will later find it natural to work for good of his country, instead of for only his own benefit．

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假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．

Time is valuable but limit．There's a famous saying, “Time is life”, this shows the importance of time．When time had gone, it will never return．It is a pity when many people make poor use of time．They spend their precious time oversleeping, drinking and hanging around．They don't realize wasting time is equal with wasting part of their life．They always regret having made little achievement so far．However, we should form the habit of value time．Do not put off what can be done today tomorrow．Laziness will not only bring us the failure, but lead us to the road to poverty and even deaths．