英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
Dear Joe,
Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interested in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp.
Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.
Yours truly
Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Tsai Qin, whose songs had a great effect on us, was on a brief tour. The next stop was Wenzhou. I looking forward to see her wonderful performance. In the morning of Mar.18^th, I set off early to the stadium. When I arrived, I found lots of fans had been gathered in the front rows to get more familiar to Tsai Qin. I held my breath, waited. At last, she turned up. The fans burst into applause. The devotion we showed to a folk queen great touched her as we seemed not to be able to control herself and moved to tears. 

请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am good at designing and making women’s clothes. In my childhood, I spent a lot of time on my grandmother’s home. She used to being a dressmaker, and at that time I was greatly impressed by her job. They seemed magical when a piece of clothes turned into a beautiful dress, skirt, or blouse. So in my adolescence, I begin to learn how to design women’s clothing from an extremely creative teacher. For me, designing women’s clothing is very interesting and exciting. I like the process of creation very well because I feel even if I were an artist. My the first model is my mother, she always gets a lot of praise when wearing the clothes I have made. In a word, she is very proud for me.

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attract me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asked me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。 短文中有10处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1: 每处错误及修改均限一词。
2: 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Editor,
I’ m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale. Fortunately, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital. After several hours’ treatment they final escaped from death. As some illegal businessmen are only interested on making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers. They must be charged by law. Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.

文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Sometimes you feel stressed because of frequently exams. Right? But don’t worry about the problem. Here are some suggestions on what to deal with it. First of all, you should have confidences and hold on to your dreams. It’s important to make a good study plan and carry them out. To stay healthy and energetic,you’d better doing some sports after school, such as playing basketball, swimming or running. Besides, balanced diet is helpful. You should eat more vegetables and fruit or avoid food with too much fat. It’s a good idea to turn out to your parents and teachers with help when you get into trouble. They will surely help you out. Last but not least, listening to music also makes you feel relaxing.

下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devote all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I got to home. Hearing that I told him, he said, “To some extent, examination results are sometime unexpected by your study level. You can’t judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advice. Now I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is more better than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinion from old people.

以下十个句子中，每句有一处错误，请找出并改正。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线/ 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
【小题1】Don’t make any voice, Your father is sleeping
【小题2】This morning I got up very lately.
【小题3】The old man looks very health.
【小题4】You do say that you would lend me some money yesterday.
【小题5】My father asked Tom and I to help.
【小题6】You can do it this way, if you dare to do.
【小题7】Your watch is similar with mine.
【小题8】Is this the restaurant in where you work?
【小题9】Either Bob or I are to blame
【小题10】The teacher asked me not do it again.

With the popularity of the Internet, more and more people prefer to going shopping online because its advantages. Online shopping can cost us a lot of valuable time. What’s more , there are a wide variety of goods for us to choose from , which may be cheaper than that in shops. Though it is convenience to go shopping online, the problems it caused can’t be ignored. Since we can’t see the actual goods on the Internet, the quality cannot be ensured. Beside, lots of advertisement on the Internet are untrustworthy, so sometimes the customers are easily cheated.
In my opinion, we should be carefully while we are enjoyed the convenience of online shopping.