Question

【题目】【2016贵州铜仁】写 作

Michael是你的美国朋友。他想了解关于中国的传统节日。请根据提示词， 以The Mid-autumn Festival”为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示词及要点：1.one of the most important...; Chinese traditional festival

2. get together, have a big dinner, with their family

3. in the open air, enjoy the bright full moon, delicious mooncake

4. mooncakes are round like...

5...carry people’s wishes to the families they love(寄托人们对所爱家人的祝愿)

要求： 1、内容完整、书写清楚、字迹工整，表达通顺；

2、 80词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3、尽可能使用提示词及要点，适当发挥。

The Mid-autumn Festival

Lunar August 15th of a year is Mid-autumn Festival. _____________________________

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This is the Mid-autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

The Mid-autumn Festival

Lunar August 15th of a year is Mid-autumn Festival. It is one of the most important festivals in China.It is also a Chinese traditional festival. On this day, people often get together to have a big dinner with their family. At night, people often enjoy the bright full moon and eat all kinds of delicious mooncakes in the open air. The mooncakes are round like the moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love. Some people don’t come back home until mid-night. How happy they are on this day!

This is the Mid-autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍中秋节的重要性、活动以及人们的愿望。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一人称和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is...，people often get together to...，The mooncakes are ..., They carry people’s wishes to ..., Some people don’t..., I hope...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中秋节的重要性，接下来介绍人们在中秋节的活动，吃的食物，以及人们的愿望，最后希望大家喜欢中秋节。此处get together, all kinds of, in the open air, come back等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。