Question

【题目】【2016浙江金华】书面表达

76. 假如你是No.2 Middle School的学生李华。下周，一批英国中学生将来你们学校进行为期两周的学习和交流。请根据下列表格中的要点，写一封自荐信，邀请其中一位学生来你家居住。

Key points（要点）	Words and expressions for reference（参考词汇）
Like to do	make friends, …
Able to do	good at, know English culture, ...
Family	friendly, helpful, able to speak English, ...

注意：（1）短文内容可适当增加； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

（3）词数：80~100； （4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

短文首句：I am Li Hua, a student from No. 2 Middle School.

Dear friend,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friend,

I am Li Hua, a boy(girl) student from No.2 Middle School. I’m writing to invite you to live in my home during the next two weeks.

I like to make friends. This is the main reason I write this letter. I’m also good at sports. I want to know something about British culture. Do you think we have a lot to talk about?

As for my family, you will like it the moment you comes. My parents are not only kind and friendly but also helpful. Believe it or not, they can also speak English.

Do you think I am your first choice now? Looking forward to meeting you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。注意人称和时态。尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性，提示词需用上。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文。上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺，注意人称和时态。文中使用了大量的的短语，如I’m writing to invite you to live in my home during the next two weeks. As for …；Looking forward to meeting you.等，写作内容包括所有提示词和提示内容。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。