Question

【题目】【2016湖北随州】书面表达

目前，家长开车接送孩子上学已经成为一个普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不一，家长们也有自己的看法。

观点1：省时；安全；提供更多与孩子交流的机会。

观点2：学校周围更拥挤；最近发生了几起交通事故；污染的空气对身体有不良影响。

你的观点：（必须用2至3句话作适当发挥）

注意：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

2．词数：80词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）

3．文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。

Nowadays it’s common for parents to drive their children to school and back home, which has caused a heated discussion.

Some parents think

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Nowadays it’s common for parents to drive their children to school and back home,which has caused a heated discussion.

Some parents think it saves time. It is very safe. And it offers more chances to communicate with their children . So they can get along well with their children.

However, other parents think it’s more crowded around schools. There have been several traffic accidents recently. And the polluted air is bad for our health.

I think we should do our things by ourselves. We can go to school by bus or on foot. And it can also help reduce pollution.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，对家长开车接送孩子上学这一现象的讨论，并阐述自己的观点。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is...，So they can ...，However, other parents think it’s...，There have been ...，I think....，We can...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，完整地表达出提纲中所要求内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了对家长开车接送孩子上学这一现象进行讨论，接下来介绍赞同这个行为和反对这一行为的原因，最后表达自己的观点。此处offer sth to sb,communicate with,get along well with, be bad for, by oneself, go to school, by bus, on foot,help do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。