Question

2．"绿色生活"（green life） 是一种没有污染、节约资源和能源、对环境友好、健康的生活．绿色生活对我们大家都有好处，请你How to be a greener person为题，写一篇90词左右的短文谈谈如何践行绿色生活．
How to be a greener person
                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's important for us to live a green life to help with the environment．对于我们来说绿色生活去保护环境是重要的
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【高分句型二】
We should walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car我们应该走路或者骑自行车去学校而不是乘车．
instead of …而不是，代替．

解答 With the rapid development of the society，great changes have taken place in people's daily life．As a result，the environment is polluted seriously．（现状）It's important for us to live a green life to help with the environment．【高分句型一】We should walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car．【高分句型二】Besides，we had better try to use things that can be recycled and say no to the things that can be used only once．Don't forget to turn off the lights when we leave the rooms．（建议）Even a small thing can make a big difference．We should do it now．

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