Question

3．班级将举办英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图，以"How to Be Happy"为题目，写一篇90词左右的演讲稿．开头和结尾已经给出（不计入总词数）．
要求：
1．短文应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明．
2．短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息．
3．短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥．

Good morning，everybody!The topic I want to talk about today is"How to Be Happy"．The following are my suggestions．
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"How to Be Happy"为题目说说怎样保持快乐．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．有生活目标---知道做什么
2．保持健康---养成好的生活习惯，锻炼
3，帮助他人---通过帮助他人获得快乐．
常用到的重点短语：
keep healthy保持健康
try one's best to do sth 尽力做某事
be ready to do sth 乐意做某事
in trouble 处于困境
share with sb 与某人分享
【高分句型】
1．①When we have life aims，we can be clear about ②what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②疑问词+to do作为about的宾语．
2．①When we help those ②in trouble，we can get much happiness．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②in trouble 处于困境，作为后置定语，修饰those．
3．I believe①②if we do so，we can have a happy life．
①believe后是宾语从句．
②if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词can，从句用一般现在时．

解答 Good morning，everybody!The topic I want to talk about today is"How to Be Happy"．The following are my suggestions．
First of all，we should have life aims．When we have life aims，we can be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life．【高分句型】（有生活目标---知道做什么）
       Next，we must keep healthy．Without good health，we will have nothing．So we should have good life habits and try our best to take exercises every day．（保持健康---养成好的生活习惯，锻炼）
       Finally，we ought to be ready to help others．When we help those in trouble，we can get much happiness．【高分句型】（帮助他人---通过帮助他人获得快乐）
       I believe if we do so，we can have a happy life．【高分句型】
      That's what I want to share with you．Thank you．

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．是要求谈谈怎样保持快乐，时态比较单一，一般现在时，考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯