Question

请你根据提示写一篇文章。

我叫Steve.我每天7点上学。

我的家离学校大约2公里。我乘公共汽车到达学校。我从来不上学迟到。

我擅长下象棋。但我不会弹吉他。

上学的晚上我不出去，我在家学习。

我最喜欢的动物是熊猫因为他们很可爱。

Hello!Everyone!

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is me.Can you tell me about yourself

 

Answer 1

Hello!Everyone!

My name is Steve. I go to school at seven o’clock every morning. I often take the buse to school because it is a little far from my home to my school. It is about two kilometers.

I am goood at playing chess but I can’t play the guitar. How I want to learn to play the guitar! I learn at home on school nights instead of going out. I want to go to a good collage in the future. I like pandas best because they are cute and lovely.

This is me.Can you tell me about yourself

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求自我介绍。主要介绍上学的方式，自己的爱好，以及上学的晚上做什么。内容材料已经给出，我们在写作时注意文章的连贯性，适当的运用连词，使文章更紧凑。

【亮点说明】这篇短文短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。能适当的运用连词，如because，but等。短语be good at ,instead of ,的应用也给文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。