Question

【题目】书面表达

上周，我们对20位学生遇到的各种“烦恼”进行调查，请你阅读下面这份调查结果，然后从中选择你认为最大的烦恼，并根据自己的实际经验或体会给出建议。

要求：1.描述下面表格中关于“烦恼”的调查结果。

2.选出你认为最大的烦恼，并根据自己的实际经验或体会给出建议。

3.逻辑清楚，语句通顺，行文流畅，自由发挥观点不限。

4.字数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Problem survey
Problems	Numbers of students（学生数）
Have too much homework and too many after-school classes.	6
Don’t get good grades at school.	5
Parents always compare them with others.	3
Don’t get on well with classmates and feel lonely at school.	4
Become fat.	2

Last week, we asked 20 students about their “problems” in life. _________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Last week， we asked 20 students about their “problems” in life. Six students said they had too much homework and too many after-school classes. Five students said they didn’t get good grades at school. Three students said their parents always compared them with others. Four students said that they didn’t get on well with classmates and felt lonely at school. Two students said that they had become fat. I have become fat and that really makes me feel bad． But I think I can do something about it．

First， I could eat less. The body needs food for energy. If you eat more than your body needs，you’ll become fat . Second， do more exercise. Doing exercise can also help the body burn the calories and make you thinner.

Don't worry too much．I think you will become better soon.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。注意人称和时态。尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性，提示词需用上。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文。上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺，注意人称和时态。文中使用First，Second使文章表达更有条理性。写作内容包括表格中所有提示词和提示内容。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。