Question

3．在我们的生活中，总会遇到许多困难或不如意的事情，如生活上的、学习上的、情感上的…但是，好的心情可以帮助我们树立信心，直面问题，发现生活的美好．请你以"Better Mood，Better Life"为题写一篇短文，让我们分享你的经历、感受或想法．字数：80词左右．
温馨提示：1．短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称．
2．这些单词也许对你有帮助：difficulty，unhappy，deal with，relax，confident
Better Mood，Better Life                  ．

Answer 1

分析 本题主题为"Better Mood，Better Life"（好心态，好生活）．
写作要点为：分享你的经历、感受或想法．

解答 范文一
　                         Better Mood，Better Life
Life is wonderful．While we're enjoying it，we have to meet some difficulties and problems．
Maybe your family is poor，your study gives you so much stress，you are not in good health…
Try to face the problems bravely and smile to life．Then you'll have a better spirit to deal with the difficulties．Relax yourself by listening to music，doing sports，writing diaries and so on．You'll keep happy all the time and have a happy life．After the storm，there must be a wonderful rainbow．
Better mood will give you better life，I am sure．
范文二   　                      
Better Mood，Better Life
Difficulties may come with the happiness in our life．I did well in my study except physics．I found so many problems on physics．I nearly wanted to give it up．
I talked about my problems to my teachers．He gave me some advice to improve my study．I also got some help from my classmates after class．I rebuilt my confidence by chatting with my parents，reading，enjoying the music and doing sports．I made great progress after that．
Nothing is difficult if I believe in myself．

点评 评分原则：
1．本题总分为15分，其中内容和语言占13分，词数占1分，书写占1分．按五个档次给分．
2．评分时，先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分．不少于70个单词，不多于90个单词，加1分．书写清晰、规范，加1分．
3．各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档：（14-15分）能扣紧主题，语言基本无误；行文连贯；表达清楚．
第四档：（11-13分）能扣紧主题，语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯；表达基本清楚．
第三档：（8-10分） 语言有一些错误或较多错误；但仍能达意；行文不够连贯．
第二档：（4-7分）     离题，只写出一、两个句子；语言错误多或很多，影响意思表达或只有个别的句子可懂．
第一档：（0-3分）     词不达意，不能写出一个完整的句子；或只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词；
说明：若写出自己和老师的真实姓名或学校的真实名称酌情扣分．