Question

初中阶段的学习生活即将结束，在离校之前，同学们讨论怎样做一件有意义的事。请根
据表中信息写一篇英语短文，为某英语报举办的征文比赛投稿。

有的同学建议	给学校买礼物，感谢母校老师
另外一些同学建议	用零花钱给灾区和贫困地区的学生买学习用品
你的建议及感想	……

注意：词数为80-100词。 短文开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
提示用语：灾区：disaster areas
We’ll leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school.
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Answer 1

One possible version:
We’ll leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school. Some students think we should buy a proper gift for our school and thank the teachers for helping and taking care of us. Others think we should buy pencils, pens , notebooks, schoolbags and some other school things for the children in the disaster areas and poor areas.
I think we can …
As students, we should thank those who help us. We should help those in need and do a bit for our society.

解析试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。写作中注意将同学们的建议介绍清楚，并介绍自己的建议及感想，不要遗漏要点。写作中注意使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
考点：应用文写作
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。