Question

11．要求：1．书写工整，美观 2．包含所有要点上的内容，可以根据需要适当地发挥
以Tree Planting Day 为题写一篇80词左右的短文．
要点如下：1．树木的重要性（净化空气，给我们提供…，可以做家具，使生活方便，美化城市）
  2．今年的3月12日，我们班去种树的情况汇报
  3．面对树木的现状（大量的砍伐），我们该怎么做？

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
We can not only use it to build houses and make paper，but also use it to make many other things我们不仅仅能用树木建造房子造纸，也可以制作其他的东西．
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
【高分句型二】
As soon as we arrived，we began to work我们一到就开始工作．
as soon as 一…就．

解答 Tree Planting Day
These years there is more and more pollution around us．So it is important to plant trees．Trees can make the environment beautiful and help to clean the air．It is also good for our health．  People use wood in many ways．We can not only use it to build houses and make paper，but also use it to make many other things．【高分句型一】For example，a lot of things in our houses are made of wood．（树木的重要性）
We went to plant trees on Mar 12th． As soon as we arrived，we began to work．【高分句型二】Some were digging holes，some were planting and others were watering．We all know trees are very useful to man．Growing trees means saving man himself．We all worked very hard．When the sun went down，we came back home．Although we were very tired，we felt very happy．（今年的3月12日，我们班去种树的情况汇报）
Unfortunately，nowadays in many parts of the world lots of people fail to realize the importance of trees．They have cut trees down in large numbers without a plan，which makes the soil washed away．So let's plant more trees and stop people from cutting them down．Everyone should try his best to keep the balance of nature．（面对树木的现状-大量的砍伐，我们该怎么做）

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