Question

反思可以使每个人成长进步，为未来做好计划可以铸就成功。初中的生活即将结束，新的高中学习将要到来。请你用英语记录下一两件最让你感动或遗憾的事，同时为你将来的生活做一点设计，下列句型可以帮助你完成作文。One…thing in my mind is…..,I am happy that……,It is a pity that I didn’t ……,I will……

要求：内容真实，要点齐全，行文连贯，字数100左右,作文的开头已给出。

My life in Junior school will come to an end soon.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My life in Junior school will come to an end soon. I experienced so much. But there is one regretful thing in my mind. It makes me feel sorry forever.On the first year of my Junior school, my English was good, because I liked my English teacher and her class was lively. But later, my English teacher left us because of her job. Another English teacher came to teach us. His class was unenjoyable and I did not like him. So from then on, I began to do something that had nothing to do with my lessons. Sometimes I listened to MP3 in class. You can imagine how my English was then.From the thing, I recognized: Not every teacher can make his class enjoyable. If you do not work hard today, you will fail tomorrow.I will learn to suit others.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文主要是回顾初中的生活，用英语记录下一两件最让你感动或遗憾的事，同时为你将来的生活做一点设计，所以文章应该分成两段，第一段是回顾，第二段是展望。第一段是过去时，第二段是一般将来时。题目给了几个句型，写作文时应该尽量用上。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。有许多的好句子。如But there is one regretful thing in my mind. I will learn to suit others.， I began to do something that had nothing to do with my lessons.“我开始做和课堂无关的事”。Not every teacher can make his class enjoyable.“不是每个老师的课堂都让人快乐的”

考点：话题作文。