Question

请以 “My School Life” 为题写一篇70词的英语短文。要点如下：
1.学校大而且漂亮，有三栋大楼，一个图书馆，里面藏书很多。
2.上午9:00开始上课，下午4:30结束。
3.我们不需早起，有大量时间从事课外活动。每天只有半小时作业。
4.我们的课程有语文，数学，地理，电脑等，我最喜欢。。。，因为。。。
5.我们有许多兴趣小组和课外活动。在班上我参加的俱乐部最多。
我们总是玩得开心。

Answer 1

My School Life
I love my school very much. It's very big and beautiful. there are three buildings and a library with a lot of books in it .We have lessons from 9:00 a.m to 4:00 p.m.
Every day we only need to spend about half an hour doing my homework so we have enough time to take part in after-school activities. We  also have many interest groups . I took part in the clubs most in the class. best of all ,we needn’t get up early.
We have many subjects,such as Chinese, math, geography, computer and so on.My favourite subject is Chinese .because l learn a lot from our chinses teacher.she is popular with us .
We always have fun in my school.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料非常详细，一共五个要点。主要介绍学校的环境，作息，活动等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少。如: a library with a lot of books ，enough time to take part in，took part in，best of all，and so on，is popular with等。有等学习中注意总结,灵活运用。同时连词的运用也使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.