Question

【题目】

现在中学生普遍觉得压力很大，有人害怕考试，有人不能很好地处理人际关系，还有的觉得父母的期望值过高也对他们造成压力。你对此怎么看？请就此问题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的做法，与同学们分享经验。

总词数：80左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

In a world, less pressure makes for a better life.

Answer 1

【答案】Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I used to be under heavy pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in class. They made me study all day, and even sent me to all kinds of after-school classes on weekends.

I had a long talk with my parents. I told them that I tried my best and I didn’t feel well. Finally, they understood me. As a result, I was free from the heavy pressure.

In a world, less pressure makes for a better life.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们就中学生现在普遍压力大这一现象，发表自己的看法，是一篇话题作文，题目中给出了写作的话题，但是具体的写作内容需要学生自己发挥想象力来完成，这也是这篇作文难度最大的地方。首先应先把中学生普遍压力大这一现象表述清楚；下面是确定自己的写作内容，对于压力自己的看法，也可以从自己的亲身经历或者亲身体会中来讲述。最后做一个总结。这篇短文应使用第一人称，根据表达需要使用正确的时态。写作时，应注意上下文的连贯，表达的流畅。要使用正确的语法结构和句型，不要写汉语式的英语，要符合英语的表达规范。