Question

3．旅行是让生活更加精彩的调味品．某英文报正以"An enjoyable trip"为题征文，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，描述一次愉快的旅行，向该报刊投稿．
提示：1．Where did you travel？
 2．How was the weather？
 3．What did you do there？
 4．What food did you eat？
注意：1．词数80以上；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息，否则不予评分．
An enjoyable trip
Last spring，                                                  

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park我们在一家著名的主题公园玩得很开心．
enjoy oneself玩得开心
【高分句型二】
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there我去三亚的旅行似乎短暂疲劳，但是我们真的在那里玩得开心，
but表示转折．

解答 A  trip
Last month，I went on a trip to Sanya，Hainan．（时间地点）I went there by train with my parents．（人物和交通方式）It took about 12 hours to get there．It is sunny there（天气）
On the first day，we walked around the city．It was quite a beautiful place．The sky was blue and the air was nice and clean．We all enjoyed the beautiful views．People there were friendly too．
On the second day，we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums．Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park．【高分句型一】
We did some shopping on the third day．Mum and I bought a lot of things．（经过）After that，we had a big dinner in a seafood restaurant．（食物）
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there【高分句型二】．（感觉）

点评 把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯