Question

书面表达。（计10分）

“保护环境，人人有责”，请以How to Be a Greener Person 为题，写一篇有关环保的短文，并适当发表你的看法。（80词左右）

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How to be a greener person

Now, we are faced with a major problem is environmental protection, which is very important to our lives .What's the meaning of 'green'?It means do something good to the earth.And how to become a 'greener' person?Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try your best and we will make a difference.

First,you shouldn't throw litter about and not spit anywhere in public.Second,you'd better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a bus or a taxi if you travel a short distance.Third,you should recycle boxes,newspapers,cans and plastic bottles .Finally,you'd better use both sides of paper.What's more,you are supposed to turn off the lights when you are not using them. If you follow these suggestions,you will start turning green.But as the saying goes"Easier said done." So it's time for actions.And let's be a greener person.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求学生以How to Be a Greener Person 为题，写一篇有关环保的短文，并适当发表自己的看法，词数在80词左右。同时写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。这篇短文主要告诉大家：目前我们面临的最大的问题——环保问题。环保问题对我们来说是很重要的，那么我们应该怎样做才能保护我们的环境，成为一个环保人员呢？

【亮点说明】这篇短文很不错。作者根据题目和要求，分析中国目前的环境问题，直接点题 How to become a 'greener' person?紧接着做出回答Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try your best and we will make a difference.下一段通过First,Second,Third,Finally,What's more…具体说出应该怎样做才是保护环境，成为一个合格的环保人员，并倡导大家马上行动起来，共同保护我们的环境。

考点：提纲类作文。