Question

14．这学期，我班转来了一位新同学，她叫李婷．请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语文章，介绍一下李婷的情况．
1．李婷出生于南京，是一位12岁的女孩． 就读于启明中学，学习刻苦，是班上的尖子生．=2．擅长唱歌，想当一位像苏运莹一样的歌手． 3．喜欢运动，很少吃零食，生活方式健康．
4．有礼貌，乐于助人，深受同学喜欢．5．今天她穿着红色的毛衣和蓝色的牛仔裤，看上去多精神啊！要求：语句通顺、要点齐全；词数：80词左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
This term a new student comes to my class．Her name is Li Ting．
This term a new student comes to my class．Her name is Li Ting．She was born in Nanjing．She is from Qingming Middle School．She studies so hard that she is a top student in the class．She is 12 years old．She wears glasses．She often wears sports clothes and trainers．And she looks smart and modern．She loves singing，too．She wants to be a singer like Su Yuning．She loves sports and hardly has hamburgers for lunch．She often eats vegetables and fruit．She is a healthy girl．She is a polite and helpful girl．All the classmats like her．Today she is wearing a red sweater and blue jeans． How spirit she looks！I think she is a good girl．We all want to make friends with her．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
She studies so hard  that she is a top student in the class．她学习很努力，在班里是一个尖子生．
so that 引导的结果状语从句 
study hard努力学习
a top student 尖子生
句型二：
How spirit she looks！她看起来多精神啊!
how引导的感叹句．结构How+adj+主语+谓语．

解答 This term a new student comes to my class．Her name is Li Ting．She was born in Nanjing．She is from Qingming Middle School．She studies so hard that she is a top student in the class．【高分句型一】She is 12 years old．She wears glasses．She often wears sports clothes and trainers．And she looks smart and modern．（外貌）She loves singing，too．She wants to be a singer like Su Yuning．（爱好）She loves sports and hardly has hamburgers for lunch．She often eats vegetables and fruit．She is a healthy girl．She is a polite and helpful girl．All the classmats like her．Today she is wearing a red sweater and blue jeans． How spirit she looks！【高分句型二】I think she is a good girl．We all want to make friends with her．

点评 能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．