Question

【题目】假定你是张华，你在外地学习的好朋友王伟发电子邮件向你请教如何学好英语。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回封电子邮件。

内容包括：

（1）看英语电影、听英语歌曲，猜测生词意思。

（2）与外教交谈。

（3）把单词写在纸条上，利用纸条记忆单词。

注意：

（1）词数：80左右；

（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Wang Wei，

I received your email yesterday. In the email，you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.

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These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.

Yours，

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Wei，

I received your email yesterday. In the email，you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.

Watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English! Watch and listen several times，and guess the meaning of the new words.

Having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way. You’d better start it with greetings or a question. Also，smile before you speak and do not feel shy. Write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room. Read the words when you see them，and try to use them.

These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.

Yours，

Zhang Hua

【解析】【亮点说明】

这篇习作结构紧凑，语言简练、内容丰富。文中be great ways to do sth.,have a conversation with, had better, start it with sth., on pieces of paper ,place sth. in your room, try to do, be useful to sb.等短语的恰当使用，使短文表意丰富；而Watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English!/ Having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way.等动名词作主语的句子和and并列句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。