Question

【题目】书面表达。

假如你的好朋友叫王平，这里有他的个人情况，请根据汉语提示，给他作个介绍。

王平今年14岁，他每天花费一个小时看书，他阅读面很广，对科学方面的书很感兴趣，周末他还喜欢去图书馆借书，图书馆就在他家对面。有时他和朋友们一起讨论他所读的书，彼此给对方建议，王平觉得读书帮助他很多，1.使他学到了很多知识。2.使他更好地了解了世界。3.自拟一点

Answer 1

【答案】

Wang Ping is my good friend. He is a boy of fourteen. He enjoys reading a lot.

He spends an hour reading books every day. He always reads different kinds of books. He is very interested in science books. He likes to borrow books from the library on weekends. The library is across from his home. Sometimes he discusses the books he reads with his friends and gives their suggestions to each other.

Wang Ping thinks reading books helps him a lot. He learns lots of knowledge from books. And he knows better about the world. He likes writing stories. So reading different kinds of books makes him a better writer.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给提纲作文，要求根据提示信息介绍一下自己的好朋友王平的情况。根据提纲内容，短文要从“爱好读书；怎样读书；读书的好处”三个方面展开写作。短文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称单数。要注意语句通顺，语法正确，语义连贯，中心突出。

写作亮点：短文层次清楚，条理分明。第一段简介好朋友的基本情况，并且以He enjoys reading a lot作为全文的中心句。第二段从不同的方面说明他是如何喜欢读书，如何读书的。重点突出，中心明确。其中用到了spend some time doing sth, be interested in sth, borrow from等等短语及句型结构，使短文生动具体。第三段描述读书的好处。本段用了动名词作主语，learn from, know about,等等，为本文增色不少。