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16．假如你是李丹，请根据所给提示，用英文写一篇推荐信，推荐王艳同学当选校优秀学生．词数：80左右．信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数、
1．王艳，16岁；一个聪明的女孩
2．学东西快，数学、语文、英语学得很好．擅长历史，对中国历史了解很多．
3．喜爱体育．篮球打得很好，是校篮球队的成员．
4．善良、勇敢，乐于助人．经常在车上给老人让座．经常帮助王叔叔挑水．曾（once）用一块湿毯子扑灭过一次火灾；
Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is 16 years old．She is a clever girl．She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．She knows （learns） a lot about Chinese history．She likes sports．She plays basketball well．She is a member of the school basketball team．She is kind and brave．She is helpful．She often gives a seat to the old people on the bus．She often helps Uncle Wang carry water．She once put out a fire with a wet blanket．
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．她学得很快．她数学、中国和英语学的好．她擅长历史．do well in 在…上做得好，和be good at意思一样，避免了重复．
高分句型二
She often helps Uncle Wang carry water她经常帮王叔叔提水．help sb  do sth帮助某人做某事．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is 16 years old．She is a clever girl．【要点一，王艳，16岁；一个聪明的女孩】She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．【高分句型一，固定词组的使用】She knows （learns） a lot about Chinese history．【要点二，学东西快，数学、语文、英语学得很好．擅长历史，对中国历史了解很多】She likes sports．She plays basketball well．She is a member of the school basketball team．【要点三，喜爱体育．篮球打得很好，是校篮球队的成员．】She is kind and brave．She is helpful．She often gives a seat to the old people on the bus．She often helps Uncle Wang carry water．【高分句型二，注意help sb，do sth．的使用】She once put out a fire with a wet blanket．【要点四，善良、勇敢，乐于助人．经常在车上给老人让座．经常帮助王叔叔挑水．曾用一块湿毯子扑灭过一次火灾；】
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan

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