Question

书面表达（满分20分）

假设你是Han Mei，针对初三这一年的学习生活，结合自己的理想，谈谈在饮食、健康、学习等方面自己的打算，并给家长或老师写一封信，谈谈自己应该被允许和不被允许做的事情，并阐明理由。词数80个左右 。在写作过程中，不能出现你所在班级及你的真实姓名。

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Answer 1

Dear dad,

It seems that I’m very busy this year because we are going to take the entrance exam to high school. I think I should be allowed to eat snacks during the break because I always get hungry near noon. I should be allowed to eat junk food every day, because it’s delicious and I really like it. I should be allowed to play soccer after school. It’s good for my health too. I want to be a computer programmer when i grow up. so I should be allowed to join a computer club on weekends. besides I think I am old enough to get a driver’s license. I want to drive my car to school every day.

yours ever

Han Mei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，写一写自己打算。由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题。根据要求可知本句主要是一般现在及过去时态，人称是第一人称。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如so I should be allowed to join a computer club on weekends.等，always等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：命题作文。