Question

假如你是晓飞同学,升入九年级后，你的学习和生活发生了很大的变化。下面是你上小学时和现在的作息时间对照表，请根据表格内容，以第一人称How I’ve changed 为题目，记录你一天的生活。

Action	Then	Now		Action	Then	Now
get up	7:00	5:30		have sports after school	Yes	No
have breakfast	7:45	6:00		watch TV in the evening	Yes	No
have classes in the morning	three	four		go to bed	20:00	22:00
have classes in the afternoon	two	four
How I’ve changed!
I’m in Grade 9. My life has changed a lot these days…..

Answer 1

I am in Grade 9. I have changed a lot in the last few years. I am much busier than I was in the primary school. I used to get up at 7:00, but now I have to get up at 5:30. I used to have breakfast at 7:4, but now at 6:00. In the past we had three classes in the moring,but now there are four .We usually had two classes in the afternoon then.But we have to have four now .When I was young,I had enough time to have sports after school and watched TV in the evening.As for now, I can’t. I used to go to bed at 20:00,instesd ,I have to go to bed at 22:00 now. As for now， I am very tired, I miss my chlidhood very much .

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。要求以第一人称的方式叙述在小学和现在的学习生活的不同。主要用到两种时态：一般现在时和一般过去时态。所给内容已经很是详细，只要注意句式结构正确，文章调理连贯就可以了。
【亮点说明】这篇短文在句式上灵活变化，在时间用词上也不断变化以避免重复，如in the last few years.，In the past，When I was young,，As for now，then ，now。I have changed a lot ，I used to have breakfast，we had three classes in the moring等。