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【题目】书面表达

你们学校的英语广播站正在举办征文活动:中学生是否应该用平板电脑上课？假如你是刘娜，请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。提示：

	观点	理由
一些老师	赞成使用	1学生对学习更感兴趣 2老师上课更容易
一些家长	反对使用	1有学生用平板电脑玩游戏 2用平板电脑对学生眼睛有害
你	...	...

要求：（1）词数：80～100个(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Nowadays, our school uses iPads in class. However, some teachers and parents have different ideas about it.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Nowadays, our school uses iPads in class. However, some teachers and parents have different ideas about it.

Some teacher agree to use them. Firstly, if the students use iPads in class, they will be more interested in studying. Secondly, it will be easier for the teachers to have class with the help of the iPads. However, some parents hold the opposite idea. They think some students will use the iPads to play games, and it will have a bad effect on their study. Besides, it is bad for their eyes .

In my opinion, the students should use the iPads properly.The teachers should guide the students to use iPads to learn more knowledge.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，讨论中学生是否应该用平板电脑上课。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Some teacher agree to...，it will be...，They think...， the students should...，The teachers should...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了老师和家长对中学生是否应该应平板电脑上课有不同的观点，接下来介绍有些老师同意上课使用平板电脑但是有些家长反对，并阐述了他们各自的理由，最后指出表达我的观点，学生要合理利用平板电脑。此处agree to do sth, be interested in, with the help of, use sth to do sth, have a bad effect on, be bad for, guide sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。