Question

根据以下有关Alan 的个人情况的介绍， 用英文写一篇介绍他的短文。词数： 80 左右。
Name: Alan Brown
Age : 16
Appearance: tall , round face, short hair
Personality: generous , humorous
Address : 69 Park Road, Sydney; live with his parents
School: No. 4 High School
Nationality ( 国籍 )： Australian
Occupation ( 职业 ) ： student
Favourite subjects: Art, Music
Weekday activities ( 活动 ) ： swimming and walking
Usual Saturday activity : having parties
Usual Sunday activity : watching TV
His dream: be a social worker

Answer 1

   
Alan Brown is an Australian student at the age of 16 in the No. 4 High School. Before he came to China, He lived with his parents at 69 Park Road, Sydney. He is tall and has a round face and short hair. He is so generous and humorous that we all like him. His favourite subjects are Art, and Music. His dream is to be a social worker. During weekdays, he often goes swimming and walks with his friends after school.He usually has parties to make friends on Saturdays while he just stays at home to watch TV on Sundays .

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写Alan Brown的年龄、外貌、性格、爱好以及他的日常活动。全文以一般现在时为主。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短词为文章增色不少，例如at the age of，during weekdays,go swimming, after school ,make friends , on Saturday ,on Sunday 等短语；运用了不定式做表语，如His dream is to be a social worker；运用了状语从句，如 Before he came to China; 运用了并列句，如He usually has parties to make friends on Saturdays while he just stays at home to watch TV on Sundays 。文章整体内容饱满，条理清晰，表达流畅。