Question

20．三年初中生活使每个人都改变了很多，谈谈你的今昔变化，请以"My change"为题完成一篇写作．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others过去我太害羞了不敢在人前讲话．
too+adj/adv+to do sth太…而不能做某事
【高分句型二】
I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．我学习很努力现在是我们班的第一名．
so…that如此…以至于．that引导的结果状语从句．

解答 My change
I'm Paul，a Grade 9student in No.1Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．In the past，I was short．I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型一】I walked to school．I wasn't interested in study and hated tests，so I was weak in all my subjects． Aand I was silent in classWhat's more，I played every day after school．（过去）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm tall．I am more outgoing and I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I take the bus to school．I like studying and  brave to ask questions in class． I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型二】Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．（改变后）
  I hope to get better grades and go to senior high school．So I will study harder and learn more．（愿望和打算）

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