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【题目】书面表达

为了节能环保及方便出行，提高生活质量，苏州市政府近年来在很多地段为市民免费提供自行车服务，但部分市民对此了解不够。假如你是一位志愿者，周日上午，你来到中心广场对市民进行自行车借用宣传。请根据以下提示写出一篇演讲稿。

提示：1. 苏州市民可以在很多地方免费借用自行车，非常方便；

2. 如果借用自行车，请注意爱惜，并及时归还；

3. 希望大家多骑车出行……（请至少列出骑车出行的两点好处。）

要求：1. 演讲稿内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥；

2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；写一篇90字左右的演讲稿。演讲稿的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：resident, convenient, low-carbon, advantage

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!

May I have your attention, please? I'm glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Suzhou. _______________________________________________________________________

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Thank you for your listening. Have a nice weekend!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!

May I have your attention, please? I’m a volunteer. I’m glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Suzhou. As we all know, environment pollution and energy waste have become some of the most important topics in this world. The best way to solve these problems is to live a low-carbon life. Since Suzhou is a crowded industrialized city, it is very necessary for our residents to change ways of traffic and take advantages from free bikes provided in dozens of rental points all round the city. Moreover, it is obviously convenient if we ride a free bike in a traffic jam. However, if you make a decision to use free bike service, please take care of the bike and return it on time. Remember, riding a bike is not only good for our city, but also for your health.

Thank you for your listening. Have a nice weekend!

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一篇演讲稿，演讲稿的内容是对市民进行自行车借用宣传。根据提纲提示，写作时要注意以下写作要点：1. 苏州市民可以在很多地方免费借用自行车，非常方便；2. 如果借用自行车，请注意爱惜，并及时归还；3. 希望大家多骑车出行……短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。

写作亮点：本范文开头是简短的问候和自我介绍；接下来从环境问题入笔，自然引出保护环境，过低碳生活，使用苏州市提供的免费自行车，然后讲述它的优点、注意事项等等。最后是结束语。短文条理分明，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。所大量使用的复杂句式及短语句型等等使短文生动，增加了可读性和感染力。