Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Tom，你的同学Li Hua在上周的英语考试中失败了，她的心情很不好。请你给她写一封信安慰她，让她早日有一个好心情。根据以下提示词，写一篇80个单词左右的短文。

提示词：fail , unhappy, spend ----on , talk with --- , do sports, learn to smile ,believe---

Dear Li Hua,

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Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I am sorry to hear that you are unhappy because of failing the English exam .I would like to give you some advice .First, you should study hard at your lessons and spend more time on taking grammar notes in every class ,Second ,you’d better talk with your teacher about your problems.Third ,you should do more sports to keep healthy .Finally ,you are supposed to learn to smile when you are in trouble.If you do these things ,I believe you will feel relaxed and get good grades .

Wish you good luck !

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。所给材料要点突出，提示词把这些要点用正确的英语表达出来。行文前要认真阅读材料，把握要点，并适当发挥。根据材料要求，这是一篇书信作文，因此要注意书信的格式。结合内容可知，要给收信人一些建议。写作中适当使用序数词，使上下文条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如：I am sorry to hear that---我很遗憾地听说……，I would like to---我想……，You should/You’d better/You are supposed to…你应该、你最好……等。另外，文中还适当使用了序数词，使文章更有条理，逻辑关系更强。